I made this cartoon.
It's a good one, you should be proud of yourself.
Did he die?
She's mean. 3/3.
Great storytelling, even in still-frame
Spooky. The color-scheme is well-done - very subtle. It makes the image moody, just like her expression. The effect is embellished by the relative clarity of her face compared to the blurry foreground, background, and obscured faces in the crowd.
Your last cartoon was very well animated, but its greatest strength is the attention each frame - like this one - gets.
Great positioning and expression, specifically all of the hilarious facial expressions. This will be my desktop background for at least a week.
A lot of great ideas
First, the rendering is very good. Consistency is important when showing many repetitions of the same character in a single frame. Nevertheless, you show her at many different angles with several postures, including some action postures. Also, the color is well-chosen. Very cool and calming, meditative. Finally, the subject is pensive, but represented with not only many different roles to be played but several abstract objects like flowers, the vial, and the others. Tying it together with the dna starnd is a nice touch too.
The pose gives here a lot of character, though a little at odds with her straight face. Still, the boots and cape/dress are nicely shaped. I also enjoy the minimal use of color. The purple highlights make an impression.
Great work on the hair. It seems to float and curl in a supernatural way. I also like the shadowy wings you gave her.
Great character designs and facial expressions. I also like your attention to the faded blue sky in the background.
The hair looks great, and so does the expression. Also, good choice with black and white.
Thanks mate, Seen B/W Brings out more contrast.
Glad you liked it
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