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More great work

The writing is very witty; you are very good at illustrating inanity. I noticed that you used more cut scenes in this one than usual but only to bring the silly ideas of the producers to life. My favorite scene was the first, the man declaring himself LORD OF THE RINGS!!!

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. We are looking to bring a little more action to the series in the future, but I do have a special affinity for the inane moments in life.

Great Skit

Your sketches are great. They feel very much like theatrical comedy sketches, so the title is well chosen. This one did not offer as much to look at as some of the others I've seen, but the joke made up for it.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks man. I wasn't sure what the response to this sketch would be but I'm really happy people have enjoyed it thus far.

Eww dude

Great tune. Well written, though a bit morbid for my usual tastes. The animation was simple but smooth and suited the song well. Also, great twist at the end, it really seperated the cartoon from other santa-burglar misunderstandings I've seen.

RWA responds:

Thanks! I didn't expect it would turn out so morbid when I was starting work on it though.

Yes,

Finally someone twists the stick-man fighting genre into a little more. By adding that cartoony ending, the otherwise strong stick animation became fresh.

SHOQ responds:

well I'm glad I changed it up, and besides, i didn't want to do an exact rip-off if the battlefield series!

saved by character

This cartoon was saved by good character design. There may not have been anything special about the animation, but the character's funny proportions and expressions made it worth watching. The music was a good choice and the character's dancing worked with it. Still, try pushing the animated dance moves into new terriroty next time.

Shan83 responds:

thank you!

2 frames

You did about as much as anyone can do with two frames of animation.

SquidBonk responds:

I resent that! It's 3 frames. >:(
and explody effects.

That's what they do

It seemed like a weak animation, but once I got the joke, I realized it was just right.

mrcula007 responds:

Thank you so much ! I hope you have happy weekend.

Great Characters and Story

Your animation and flash technique is pretty good, but obviously your characters and story are the most important things here. Well paced. You spent a little time explaining the background and dove right into the characters' worlds.I liked it a lot.

avidlebon responds:

Thanks! I've had several people that wanted me to change it when it was still in the storyboard stage saying it went too slow. I'm glad that you like how it turned out, thanks!

Horror and Safety

I like how the safety lesson interupts moments of violence and horror. Funny stuff!

Dilly89 responds:

Thanks

Yeah it was something I HAD to use.

After all, a teacher at my school is marking this work :)

Creepy and Cute

Nicely animated. Very smooth without overusing tweens. But definately add some sound or even music. Enjoyed it!

F-I-A responds:

Updated the flash with what it lacked. Thank you for viewing.

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